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Okay I admit. This story is good. No more than good. This is great. It gave me chills down my spine. I am not one to be easily scared. But this... this is something that made me whimper and put the scent of fear in me. The plot of the story is great and you can feel the intensity of everything.

The words that allow you to visualize the event can make one person who was fearless , have their minds be torn. When I was reading the whole story , it pulled me in and I was reading for hours on end to find out what will happen next. When Wefan was doing all that to the Pokemon. My emotions took over and I was cowering in fear. You can visualize the events. This idea is one of a kind and can make you read it many times on end. The person who wrote this made the story have good style and creativity in making this. And it can make you go into a state of shock on how much it can impact on you.

If this isn't the image of a perfect suspense story and fear. Well than i don't know what is! Good job sir/ ma'am and have a nice day.
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